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Well first of all sorry Hanoko I couldnt finish this part fast enough, but awesomeness takes time lol plus a little breaks here and there hahah. Any yeah this is part 2 of the DOA HAYATE COMIC, again I did not include the dialouge because I dont want to give the story away just yet. So when I do these in color you will be able to see all of the dialouge and hopefully there will be some surprise.
Again the background was a BITCH!!!! I mean just look at all that detail I mean all that detail is awesome but damn that takes a long time to do.
Once again I kept it traditional and drew it with a pencil and pen on a half sheet a paper so it wouldnt be all that big so enjoy
Again the background was a BITCH!!!! I mean just look at all that detail I mean all that detail is awesome but damn that takes a long time to do.
Once again I kept it traditional and drew it with a pencil and pen on a half sheet a paper so it wouldnt be all that big so enjoy
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The first panel is a bit off; looking at Ryu's jawline to the back of his head, he looks like he's missing some of the back of his head. And his arm doesnt look right, judging from his upper arm his hand ought to be higher and closer to his face, unless you were foreshortening it then his hand needs to be bigger and tilted a bit more.
Other than that, I think you nailed Hayate down well since Hayate really does look like Hayate and no other. His muscle anatomy looks correct on the mid and bottom left panels, but his forearm muscles on the bottom right panel doesnt look right. I really like his detailed clothing, even though he's wearing my least favorite costume.
Other than that, I think you nailed Hayate down well since Hayate really does look like Hayate and no other. His muscle anatomy looks correct on the mid and bottom left panels, but his forearm muscles on the bottom right panel doesnt look right. I really like his detailed clothing, even though he's wearing my least favorite costume.